The practical reader

A recent blog post reminded me of the many reasons 'practical' people dislike 'poetry'. The words are too confusing, the meanings too obscure, and the entire melange is nothing more than an attempt to obfuscate the simplest observations. While I accept that a lot of bad poetry exists, most of it seems like the result of people 'trying' to be artistic. Are words more lovely or more meaningful only because they rhyme?

I believe the principles of good writing- clarity, sharp editing, every word responsibly contributing to the meaning of the whole- apply to poetry as well. And the following poem makes part of this the point better than I could :)

A Practical Reader
- Carl Dennis

I'm willing to buy your book of poems
If you can promise that whenever you liken a day
To a coin that cant be hoarded,
You spell out exactly what I should buy with it
In the few hours left me before the sun
Sinks behind the garage outside my window,
What items more valuable than those in the shops
And mention where they're available locally.

I'm a plain person, I admit, with little patience
For vague suggestions, so if you believe
Poems need to be vague to be suggestive,
I'd better save my money for something else
(Money I dont have endless supplies of,
Not with my job as bookkeeper for a hospital),
A work of history, say, or biography
Or a book of encouragement from the self-help section.

I could use a poem showing that those who seem
To be having a better time at work than I do,
Or a better time at the beach or hiking a trail,
Have simply learned to do more with moods
No better than my good moods,
While making less of the lesser ones.

I wont complain if your book has many poems
Praising the joys of giving so long as it has a few
On the joys of taking. How to choose friends,
For example, who wont forget me after I'm gone,
Who'll tell my story now and then to themselves
If not to others. Friends glad to remember,
Who believe their gladness would be complete
If I were sitting beside them sharing it.

As for friends I've lost, do you have some advice
For the times I'm asked to speak at a funeral
When my feelings, ardent before,
Suddenly seem too cool and measured?
Dont tell me to level my words down
To the flats of fact in the name of integrity
When the task before me is rising to the occasion.
If my feelings cant make the climb, inspire me
To send up some phrases that would be honest
If I were the person I'd like to be.